Friday, 23 January 2015

Magazine Pitch

6 comments:

  1. I believe that the target market is young teenagers that listen to Hip hop
    I anticipate seeing the following artists J. Cole, Kendrick Lamar and Bad Meets Evil
    To improve, have you considered specifying age and colour sceme

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  2. I think the target market for your magazine is young teens who like hip hop
    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Mobb Deep
    To improve have you considered a set frequency for your magazine e.g. Monthly, weekly
    I like the simple colour scheme you are using I think this will work well with the genre

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  3. I believe the target audience is 14-19 year olds,could maybe stretch to 20 or 21
    I anticipate seeing artists such as Mobb Deep, Kendrick Lamar, and Public Enemy
    To improve: you could lower the price of your magazine, due to the stereotypical person that would listen to this music they would not have the money to buy this magazine. Good colour pallet, reflects the Hip hop aspect nicely. Have you considered the frequency of the magazines release.

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  4. I believe that your target audience is 16 - 21, this is due to the fact that the age range you have said I feel to not work with your style of magazine.
    I anticipate seeing artists such as: Lowkey, Mobb Deep, Mos Def, Wiz Khalifa.
    I feel that the age range is wrong due to the fact that a 14 year old has little chance of affording your magazine. Also, I feel that people older than 19 would appreciate your magazine and would be able to afford your magazine. I feel the price should echo the detail in your magazine, therefore I anticipate a lot of detail I your magazine.
    I think you could also include a frequency (I would recommend a monthly, due to price). Although, I feel the style of music magazines you are relating this to, suites your genre well.

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  5. I believe that your target audience is 14-21 and people who listen to hip-hop
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; Mobb Deep, Notorious B.I.G and Kendrick Lamar
    To improve, have you considered lowering the price of your magazine

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  6. I believe the target audience is late teens and early twenties who enjoy hip-hop music.

    I anticipate seeing such artists as Mobb Deep & Wiz Khalifa.

    To improve, I think you could just increase the price a tad more so that you make it super clear to everyone that this is going to be the most luxurious, royal and the best magazine that someone could ever read which just so happens to be coated in gold with platinum fragments embedded into each page. ;-)

    Wait no... maybe bring it down a bit so your age range (which I think needs to be a bit more specific) can afford it every week or month (which you also need to include - how frequent it'll be released.)

    Other than that, very good!

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