Look at my comments on your cover for what to do. Look also at artists like Shepard Fairey and pay attention to his font choices.
Build your contents page off a 5 column grid pattern and flat plan it in detail before attempting it again.
Your DPS needs work. It feels back to front as it lacks a header which 'places' the article. What is it about? Why should I read it etc? Again flat plan of a 5 column per page grid system.
Raj
ReplyDeleteLook at my comments on your cover for what to do. Look also at artists like Shepard Fairey and pay attention to his font choices.
Build your contents page off a 5 column grid pattern and flat plan it in detail before attempting it again.
Your DPS needs work. It feels back to front as it lacks a header which 'places' the article. What is it about? Why should I read it etc? Again flat plan of a 5 column per page grid system.